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Priyanka was a straight ace student ever since high school. She had always come first in her class ever since 8th standard. Since she didn’t have many competition for securing the top spot in her class, she turned out to be an egoistic, haughty and self-centered person. If anyone approached to just talk with her, she’d just ignore them and walk with her nose held high, this used to irritate her friends as she just wouldn’t lend an ear to what they wanted to say to her and they started hating her. Her attitude towards others didn’t change even after she graduated and in the due course of time, she accumulated many enemies, both male and female.

Even after Priyanka (Priya from now on) graduated her degree with high honors (no surprise in that), her haughtiness and arrogance did not diminish. Even when her friends went to congratulate her, she showed her same old attitude. This was the last strand and her friends snapped. They decided to plot a plan to bring her back to Earth. They decided to teach her a lesson at the next possible chance.

Priya, now 22, was 5’9”, very gorgeous, with an hour glass body and fair skin, she was a gem to the eye for on-lookers whenever she stepped out in her saree. Priya has very long, silky and straight dark colour hair which reached below her knees. Whenever she used to go around the neighbourhood, her thick 3” hair braid would swing left and right when she used to walk. She was the dark-haired Rapunzel of her colony, but her attitude towards others had not changed one bit, still the egoistic, arrogant and haughty person on the inside and clearly her hair was her pride nowadays.

The Colony Party was being hosted at Priya’s colony on New Year’s Eve. The party was organized on the terrace of the community building under open sky, with special lighting arrangement for the party. There was also a swing at the terrace where some children could play while the parents enjoy their friends company. Everyone from the colony was present. Priyanka came slightly late to the party. As usual she was wearing a sari and her long silky hair was open and flowing over her back and butt, she had made a bun at the top to keep her hair at butt-level. When Priya came to party most of them couldn’t help but notice Priya’s long beautiful hair.

Good food and alcohol was arranged and all the men were sitting in two three small groups and drinking, chatting and laughing. While at the same time women had also made smaller groups and were having good time sharing gossips. The children were playing near the swing. Women were checking out each other’s dresses and sarees. Priya’s long beautiful hair was also admired a lot in the group. Many women also had a glass of alcohol in their hands. Although they did not drink too much like the men, just social drinking. Priya was also a part of a small group of women and Priya also had a glass of alcohol in her hand along with a few other women of the group as she wanted to part of a group from now on, a surprise indeed. There were few women in the group who were not drinking. Priya and other women persuaded them to have at least one small peg just as a formality and made them drink a small amount of alcohol. Priya later joined them for few more pegs when she came to know they were her high school classmates. She tried her level best to be part of it but her egoism didn’t keep her long with them.

Once it was 12 o’ clock everyone wished each other happy new year and shared hugs. Party continued for a little while. As it started getting late slowly people started leaving with their children. Most of the people had already left by 12:15AM. There was one group of men, her classmates from school who had just moved into the colony, were left who were drinking and still having a good party. It seemed their party had just begun. While there was also a last group of women left, who also were her old school classmates. Priya also decided to leave and so she started to move out.

While walking she was passing by the group of men who were drinking, and those men being from her school, called her just for a casual chat. They asked each other’s well-being and what everyone was doing these days. Meanwhile, taking cue and seeing the development in their plan, the last group of women also left after five minutes.

Priya was the only one left now with that last group of 5 men. Priya also decided to leave and told the men “You guys carry on. I will leave now.” One of the men said “Sure. But at least have one drink with us. You were forcing everyone in the party to have at least one drink. You should have at least one drink with us just as a formality to honour the company.” Priya reluctantly agreed. On purpose slightly more quantity of alcohol was poured in Priya’s glass.

While Priya was having the glass of alcohol with the men, the chat continued. While chatting one of the men complimented Priya on her dress.

The other said “Come on, her hair is more gorgeous. Just look at it.”

And while saying this, he hold Priya’s arm and turned around Priya, so that now Priya’s back was towards everyone. Priya’s silky long hair was untied and everyone stared at its beauty and length. They were surprised that it was below her knee level and had such a silky texture. Everyone agreed that Priya’s hair was more beautiful than her dress. Priya was loving all the attention she was getting and was blushing. Especially after three drinks that she had with the other women and fourth one already in her hand.

One of the men asked. “Can I touch your hair?”

Priya said “OK”.

Once they got the permission. All of them touched Priya’s hair and felt its softness. They just couldn’t stop touching it. They all together started to play with her hair. Put their hand in Priya’s hair and feel its softness and silkiness. All the men were playing with Priya’s hair and one of the men suddenly realized something.

He said “Guys I’ve found a hidden treasure.”

And he asked Priya to take all her long hair in the front. Priya was not ready but he was very persuasive and finally he himself took Priya’s hair and put it in the front. And everyone was surprised. Priya was wearing a completely backless blouse!! It just had two threads on the back to hold the blouse. The back was completely bare and no one had come to know about it for the whole party since Priya’s back was hiding behind the long curtain of hair!!

They all started touching Priya’s back and feeling her soft skin. They said “you have such beautiful back; you should cut your hair so that your back would be visible in the backless blouse”. All of them were drunk and a bit high. They decided to cut Priya’s hair a bit.

Although a Priya had four drinks she was still in her senses and she didn’t agree to it. But the men were very persuading and said that such beautiful back must be visible. And also they should also get a chance to play with Priya’s hair and cut it. They said it would be a once in a lifetime opportunity to trim such beautiful hair.

Priya realized she had no choice so asked them to only trim the ends. They agreed. One man went downstairs and brought scissors and comb from his house. And one of them drifted away from the group saying he’ll have a smoke and return but instead he went on to switch on the cameras set at selected locations beforehand, which the women group didn’t knew, to record Priya’s ordeal. Priya was made to sit on a stool in the middle of the terrace. One of the men took Priya’s pallu of the saree and dropped it on the floor!! Priya was shocked! He said that since we are cutting hair no hair should stick to the saree since there was no cape.

Priya was now wearing only a small backless blouse on the top, it was pretty short even in the front, while it was completely backless, evident that she was wearing no bra. So now Priya’s back was completely open as there was no pallu to cover a part of it. To soothe her down, one more glass with excess alcohol mixed with a sleeping pill was given to her. Unassumingly, Priya took it as the men continued playing with her hair and she also had failed to notice the women group which had returned just in time to watch her shearing.

One of the men combed Priya’s beautiful long hair. Then the other one said even he wants to comb Priya’s hair. So even he combed it second time and made a section in Priya’s hair. He kept the front hair fall on Priya’s lap, below her knees, and hair behind the ears was only pulled back for cutting.

He then started to cut Priya’s hair at the ends and slowly snip by snip he started cutting Priya’s hair by 2 inches. Snip.. snip … snip… he slowly cut off 2 inches from Priya’s beautiful long hair. Priya’s below knee length hair was reduced to roughly around knee length.

Another man said “you don’t know how to do it, Let me show you” and snatched the scissors.

Priya was saying “Don’t cut more hair” to which he said “But your back is not yet visible!! We need to cut slightly more” And he started cutting more of Priya’s hair. This time he cut around 3 inches of hair!! Rain of long strands of hair started falling on the floor.

A lot of hair was around Priya’s feet. She started getting tensed and gulped her whole glass of alcohol. Now her hair was at butt level and Priya was shaken with the amount she had lost, she tried to tell them to STOP but the alcohol prevented her from saying anything. Later, another man took the scissors and started snipping her hair and brought it to mid butt length. Some of the hair was lifted up and the hair at nape was combed down. The scissors was passed as baton from one man to the next and Priya kept on losing more hair.

By the time the fifth man finished the cutting, hair was stuck in Priya’s saree around her waist and also on Priya’s lower back. Priya’s once below knee length hair was now reduced to above waist length at the back. When the lifted hair was released, hair covered Priya only to the top of her butt. The women gestured that her punishment was enough and they left the building thinking the men would stop at that. One of the men escorted the women outside the building assuring them that that was the end of Priya’s ordeal, but it wasn’t.

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